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Blood pours to the ground
Staining the concrete

A maddening laugh
Rips through the silence

My heartbeat slows
As I watch my blood
Form a pool around me

You said you loved me.
You said cared.

When you said
You had a surprise
I didn't think it would be this

You know how I hate knives
Yet you stand over me
Holding one
Covered in my blood

Your eyes stare down at me
I can see insanity in them
And my death

It's getting harder to breathe

I cant do anything
But stare at you
As you smile at me

That smile that I used to love
Now makes my stomach turn

Everything's starting to go black

You lean down and kiss me
Your lips are ice

'I love you'
You say it so sincerely
But there's only more pain

Your voice
Saying those three words
That are supposed to make a girl happy
Are the last things I hear
Before everything goes dark
And I enter that eternal slumber.

You said you loved me
You said you cared
Then you caused me pain
And now,
Now I am no more.
Should this have a mature content warning? I'm not sure. For now I'll leave it blank, comment if you think it should.

100 Theme Challenge #26: Death
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:iconthewacko4u:
TheWacko4u Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Student General Artist
*tear*
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Student Writer
:hug:
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shazan22 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O_o :(
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Writer
I know...
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shazan22 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
its real good though
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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shazan22 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:) true
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:iconsamfiresun606:
SamFireSun606 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Twisted love . . . my favorite! ;D
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Writer
Mine to!
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:iconsamfiresun606:
SamFireSun606 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*uncontrollable laughter* Yay! I'm Sammi, you??? ;D
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Student Writer
I'm Taylor, but just call me Dark
*evil laughter*
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:iconsamfiresun606:
SamFireSun606 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*uncontrollable laughter* Seriously?
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Student Writer
Lmao seriously. Hell call me whatever you want.
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:iconsamfiresun606:
SamFireSun606 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahaha . . . Omg! I can't breathe now! ;D
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Student Writer
Lol
:lmao:
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logan247365 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Very twisted. I like twisted.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Writer
Me to. :XD:
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:iconyuriko-chan24:
Yuriko-chan24 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
*cringes from the sadism* dark...very dark...most twisted thing i've ever read...
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Writer
Heh, I know. See what lies in that dark part of my mind?
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:iconyuriko-chan24:
Yuriko-chan24 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
yes, so much so that it makes me wonder if there's something wrong with you...XD jk
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Student Writer
Lmao omg I can;t believe you. If there's something wrong with me then there is certainly something wrong with you. jk
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:iconyuriko-chan24:
Yuriko-chan24 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
well thank you! lol
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012  Student Writer
Haha no problem.
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Mallanaga Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh snap... i thought you were going a different direction with this from the original thumbnail. this is fucked. it's nice though... i really got a good visual - hence the fuckedness. ummm, cheers? i think...
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Writer
Lol thank you.
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:icondarknessunderthemoon:
I think this should have mature content. For those who it may trigger. >.<
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Writer
Good to know. I'll put it up.
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:icondarknessunderthemoon:
Np. :heart:
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