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The entry to the soul,
the objects that always tell the truth.

Eyes that judge.
Eyes that love.
Eyes that hate.
Eyes that wait.

That simple orb,
with an array of color.

Eyes that are cruel.
Eyes that are perfect.
Eyes that are regretful.
Eyes that are broken.

Like snowflakes,
eyes are never the same,
be it emotion or color.

Eyes that close.
Eyes that open.
Eyes that freeze.
Eyes that burn.

That simple color-filled orb,
that shows the soul filled with love,
or that can be cold as ice.

Eyes that are filled with hope.
Eyes that are filled with confusion.
Eyes that are filled with sadness.
Eyes that are filled with nothing.

As bright as day,
but as cold as ice.
Eyes are that small window
into the soul,
that we always try to hide.
For :iconpoetry-book:'s contest about eyes.



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:iconcrematedman:
CrematedMan Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
Obviously a little cliched, beautiful nonetheless.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you. :hug:
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
wow so true my eyes are like that
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Oilux Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student Writer
Really? That's cool.
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
yeah but my eyes tell lies to the people i care about which sticks
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Oilux Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Writer
I bet it does.
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
yeah ^-*
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NekoWolf95 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how the picture of the eyes definitely goes with what was written. excellent job~ I love it :3
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Oilux Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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NekoWolf95 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome!
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