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This is a poem.
It's full of lines,
and goes with a meter,
rhyming of words of course
and contains more than you think.

So much thought
is going into this poem
to many words
and so many emotions
that it's almost hard
for the poet
to capture it in a few words.

This poem has a deep meaning
that you will feel is just out of your grip
and it shall be misheard and misread in its time.

For now though,
this is just a poem
that is full of rhythm
and words too big to pronounce.

This is a poem,
full of words
and rhyme
and meter
and emotions
and love
and hope
and fear.

This poem is just words on a paper
that are meant to make you think.

Can you feel the love,
or the hate, or even the fear,
in this poem?

This is a poem,
with a simple repeating line
that is just meant
to make you think.
My boyfriend took me to this open microphone comedy club thing and this one guy got up there and read a poem that inspired this. It's not nearly as good as his was though.





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SanneCerise Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really like your poem! Great job.
I've just started writing poetry again and this inspires me. Thank you! :)
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AlmrixGirl Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student General Artist
i like your poem:) (Smile)

do you think you can join: fav.me/d7487g2
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AnimeKitto Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student General Artist
:iconsmileyplz:
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R-J-S-KING Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

looking at the other comments it seems like every second person is a poet,

like me and like you they make us think.

 

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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student Writer
They do. Thanks for reading.
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:iconbeforeidrown:
BeforeIDrown Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Writer
It captures what is stored within a poem. Great write.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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KavotofFire Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I totally understand, I'm a poet too.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Student Writer
Poets are the best
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:iconkavotoffire:
KavotofFire Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True
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CAPRIOGIRL Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Artist
guys check this out ;) [link]
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
Did you seriously just self advertise on my deviation?
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:iconcapriogirl:
CAPRIOGIRL Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Artist
ahh i guess so :p
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Aquarius-Claire Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Writer
I'm not a fan of this. It feels like a blueprint to a poem, and it didn't make me feel or think.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
That makes me sad to hear, next time I'll try to do better
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unknown-coolness Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
this is amazing! :#1:
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Student Writer
Oh wow thank you!
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Neko-Chan199 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like, your poems!! I'm a "writter", so to speak, so I fell yo bro!;P
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Writer
Sorry for the late reply! Thanks though. :iconbro-fist:
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Neko-Chan199 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah we ROCK!!!!:iconhiphiphoorayplz:
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Writer
:iconbrohoofplz:
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:iconneko-chan199:
Neko-Chan199 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah!:iconepichighfive1plz:
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FiyeroTigelaar Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love how this really did make me think....it's been a while since i read something like that
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Writer
That really make me happy. :hug: Thanks.
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ArandomMoon Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...It's exactly what I always think when I create words in the palm of my hand and you just said it just like that!
You beat me to it. *fistbump*
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Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Writer
:iconbrohoofplz:
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mijustin Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
cool. .
something blank and meditating to read with. . .
does it guys ?

^__^
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13thBloodhound Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fave this.. :D
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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13thBloodhound Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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WalkTheLane Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Mm. I really like this one. I'm not really sure what it is, it just... intrigues me. : )
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
That's great.
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
*too big to prononce
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
I had that before and someone told me that it was incorrect. I guess I'll change it again.
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heretichero666 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Nice work. It kinda reminds me of my own poetry class that I have to take. There are just so many rules to poetry that you can't even write it and enjoy it.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
I know. The first time I ever took a creative writing class they said that everything that I was doing was wrong. For a while it made me not want to write.
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Gravenguilt Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Writer
Haha, so satirical and humorous.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks?
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:iconomnitilly:
OmniTilly Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
It's still fun though!
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
It is. :D
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maddielolxd Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you spelled "too" wrong in one line
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
Did I? Sorry.
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spacecow4 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student General Artist
They spelled "too" wrong on quite a few lines.
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nyduta23 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
interesting, ... coolio
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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TheAverageOne Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Nice!
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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jeanaunry Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Great work! Really got me thinking!
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