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This is a poem.
It's full of lines,
and goes with a meter,
rhyming of words of course
and contains more than you think.

So much thought
is going into this poem
to many words
and so many emotions
that it's almost hard
for the poet
to capture it in a few words.

This poem has a deep meaning
that you will feel is just out of your grip
and it shall be misheard and misread in its time.

For now though,
this is just a poem
that is full of rhythm
and words too big to pronounce.

This is a poem,
full of words
and rhyme
and meter
and emotions
and love
and hope
and fear.

This poem is just words on a paper
that are meant to make you think.

Can you feel the love,
or the hate, or even the fear,
in this poem?

This is a poem,
with a simple repeating line
that is just meant
to make you think.
My boyfriend took me to this open microphone comedy club thing and this one guy got up there and read a poem that inspired this. It's not nearly as good as his was though.





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SanneCerise 5 days ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
I really like your poem! Great job.
I've just started writing poetry again and this inspires me. Thank you! :)
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AlmrixGirl Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like your poem:) (Smile)

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AnimeKitto Jan 11, 2014  Student General Artist
:iconsmileyplz:
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R-J-S-KING Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

looking at the other comments it seems like every second person is a poet,

like me and like you they make us think.

 

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Oilux Sep 9, 2013  Student Writer
They do. Thanks for reading.
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BeforeIDrown May 5, 2013  Student Writer
It captures what is stored within a poem. Great write.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux May 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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KavotofFire Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I totally understand, I'm a poet too.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Apr 22, 2013  Student Writer
Poets are the best
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KavotofFire Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True
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