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This is a poem.
It's full of lines,
and goes with a meter,
rhyming of words of course
and contains more than you think.

So much thought
is going into this poem
to many words
and so many emotions
that it's almost hard
for the poet
to capture it in a few words.

This poem has a deep meaning
that you will feel is just out of your grip
and it shall be misheard and misread in its time.

For now though,
this is just a poem
that is full of rhythm
and words too big to pronounce.

This is a poem,
full of words
and rhyme
and meter
and emotions
and love
and hope
and fear.

This poem is just words on a paper
that are meant to make you think.

Can you feel the love,
or the hate, or even the fear,
in this poem?

This is a poem,
with a simple repeating line
that is just meant
to make you think.
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My boyfriend took me to this open microphone comedy club thing and this one guy got up there and read a poem that inspired this. It's not nearly as good as his was though.





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Mood: Joy !BeforeIDrown May 5, 2013  New member Student Writer
It captures what is stored within a poem. Great write.
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=Oilux May 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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~KavotofFire Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I totally understand, I'm a poet too.
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=Oilux Apr 22, 2013  Student Writer
Poets are the best
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~KavotofFire Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True
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~CAPRIOGIRL Jan 2, 2013  Student Artist
guys check this out ;) [link]
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=Oilux Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
Did you seriously just self advertise on my deviation?
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~CAPRIOGIRL Jan 3, 2013  Student Artist
ahh i guess so :p
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~Aquarius-Claire Dec 31, 2012  Student Writer
I'm not a fan of this. It feels like a blueprint to a poem, and it didn't make me feel or think.
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=Oilux Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
That makes me sad to hear, next time I'll try to do better
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