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I want to scream
I want to cry
I want to kick and punch
And get rid of these emotions
Inside of me.

But I wont.

Because that ruins my image
Of a normal girl.

Outside is a normal
Happy, hyper girl.
Inside are all the
Emotions that I can't show.

I want to scream
And shout
And hit
And run away
And cry until I cant see

But I wont
Because you all
Wouldn't handle the real me.

The one who's bitchy
The one that's over sensitive
The one that doesn't listen
The one who hates everything

So leave me alone
So I can cry
And scream
And shout
So that I can be
The person
That no one else sees.
Posted this on my facebook page a while ago, I think its time to upload it here.

#HellenicPolytheists

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:iconmysticicekitten:
MysticIceKitten Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012   Artist
It's beautiful and well written. Those emotions are tormenting. Varry good job.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much
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Torimaki-chan Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
I can't even begin to explain how much this describes me. It's beautiful and well written :)
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you
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RainshadowArtist Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you SO much for writing this. I'm not exaggerating when I say this poem describes me perfectly. Those emotions are tormenting. I go through nearly each day as this nice, somewhat average girl, and everyone accepts it. It's sometimes nauseating to face that I'm the only one who doesn't.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Student Writer
I know exactly how you feel, I mean its just exhausting having to go around with this mask on.
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theheatoftheart Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student General Artist
It's sad people can't show the way they really are...
very beautiful and emotional poetry =)
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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KandyKat14 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist
T-T so sad!
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student Writer
I know :crying:
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:iconbreezyhawaii:
BreezyHawaii Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is exactly how i feel.
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mrs-drwho Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Student Writer
i sadly kinda relate.
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tionichm Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:/
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200breast Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
Love this. I can totally and completely relate to this
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MoonlightWolf765 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
wooow is totally my personality :) awsome
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you
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MoonlightWolf765 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011
:)
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RockBoci Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
I think everybody is like that. Want to scream sometime and cry.
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thehatterschild Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Student General Artist
FFFFFFF THANK YOU. :D
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:iconchichinina:
Chichinina Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
god, that's sad...but, are you always with you friends or family?i think you're right, you should get some time for you to cry and shout...that time that everybody deserves for itself.
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KachouFuugetsu Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
I love this. Beautiful!
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MrLostInTime Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
Haha so true
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:iconofficer-sarcasm:
Officer-Sarcasm Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm lost for words, it's so beautiful.
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:iconparadeofjoy:
ParadeOfJoy Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011
You aren't alone, I feel the same way.
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AquariusNymph Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...its amazing how so many of us hold in emotions and bite our tongues smiling, i live with it everyday, having to hold in emotions, until one day i can't hold on anymore and i spend a whole day crying...sadly
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f-a-p-t-a-s-t-i-c Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I'm not the only one.

This is beautiful, I love it. c:
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BlueDarkAngelWings Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011
Wow, that is a really good poem.
My heart ached at some points when I read this because in someways I am and feel the same way.
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yukikaname415 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist
wow that sounds so much like me and my life
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Dannyluvr58 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student Writer
just like a ton of other people here, you've basically summed me up into a pageful of lines... it's scary how we're all so similar. beautiful poem. it really stuck me :D
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jmfisfab Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! I love it.
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Springheart16 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student General Artist
*chuckle* hm-hm-hm. My friend, I promise, some one will someday actually glimpse the real you, see some of the person that not everyone sees. Many will, eventually. Most will turn away, but I promise there will be at least one, maybe even a few, who will want to spend time with that person, who will want to figure out where they came from.
All you have to do, is last until then, and allow the opportunities to arise.
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FallenShadow76 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Dude, this is me on SO many levels. :o
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GodsSilentArtiste Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, it's like you've captured my lowest moments of depression into words. Sometimes you just gotta escape the world and let it all out. This world doesn't want to know the real us because it reminds them of their problems that they hide so well behind their fake smiles and shallow words. Great piece!:)

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Stand for something or you'll fall for anything.

Peace and love,
-Alfia
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britney-the-writer Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student General Artist
this describes me perfectly owo;;
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