Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconoilux: More from Oilux


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
September 3, 2012
File Size
818 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
8,519
Favourites
614 (who?)
Comments
26
Downloads
104
×
The Siren's Call.

Bright pink lips,
booty shorts,
a bikini top.

She gestures wildly,
beckoning every person
to have a dance with her.

Another drink goes down
and I'm pulled into her dance
where hips thrust wildly
and hands roam everywhere.

Yet when lips meet,
it's hollow and broken
sloppy and careless
no spark or real feelings.

I don't walk away
or even pull apart.
Our limbs mesh together more
and even though it's full of sweat
and nothing more than heat
I cannot bring myself to turn away.

This Siren has captured me,
and for the rest of the night
I'm hers.
In Greek mythology, the Sirens were dangerous and devious creatures, portrayed as women who lured nearby sailors with their enchanting music and voices to shipwreck on the rocky coast of their island.

So I took it more into today's sense, made a Siren more modern. I thought today, Siren's would patrol bars, and really sing their songs with their body's rather than their voices.

Image from: [link]




Like my writing? Then like my facebook page!
[link]
Add a Comment:
 
Flagged as Spam
Flagged as Spam
Flagged as Spam
:iconsvitavotara:
Svitavotara Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
Great idea for the modern-type Siren! Your writing is so good!! The picture's amazing too!
Reply
:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! And I love your icon!
Reply
:iconc1oud9:
c1oud9 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
great imagery...
Reply
:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you <3
Reply
:iconc1oud9:
c1oud9 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
anytime ^^
Reply
:iconghostbongo:
GhostBongo Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Student Writer
I really liked your piece. I did feel that it could use more imagery in stanza. I think that if you have each line in your poem start with some type of image it would give more of an impression on what you're trying to portray. Other than that I feel that this is a very good piece, and I really enjoyed reading it.
Reply
:iconbeastlydigital:
BeastlyDigital Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Calling... You hear the calling...

Calling... You hear the calling

Let me go
Gravity
What's on my shoulder?
Little by little, I feel a bit better...

*+9000 internet points if you get that reference* ;)

I loved the picture so much, I didn't even realize there was a poem attached to it. Both are equally great!

Keep up the good work! :iconthumbsupplz:

:iconchibiamericaplz:
Reply
Add a Comment: