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The moon's envious glow,
is nothing more, than the suns bright rays
shinning back from a gray face.

The loneliest person in the world,
she can only reflect what others disperse
and never show her own light.

Sometimes though, she gets her desires
to change the light she reflects
and becomes orange or red.

It never lasts though.

She finds solace in her reflection
to know that she is actually there,
and to feed what little pride she has.

And the moon sits alone
never to have company.
Only her mournful shriek her only sound.

She can never be the one
who provides light and comfort.

The most she can do
is give off a little reflected light,
that isn't even her own.

Everyone loves the sun,
that warm, life birthing parent.

And everyone ignores,
the pale envious moon.
Who wants nothing more
than to be loved.
Hey, so...ya. I love the moon. Even thought that's probably not what this poem conveys.




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:icondannyanthony:
DannyAnthony Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I've linked this poem to my photo:

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:iconkarageorges:
Very nice!
Greetings from Paris!
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
Oh thank you so much!
Greetings from California USA!
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:iconyuriko-chan24:
Yuriko-chan24 Jun 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
and yet...the moon is what most romantics refer to in stories or poems...love how you portray just the opposite ^^
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Oilux Jun 20, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks. People tend to love the moon, and I just thought about what the moon would feel all alone there.
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:iconyuriko-chan24:
Yuriko-chan24 Jun 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
yeah...there's a moon in each and every one of us...unfortunately there's one ON each and every one of us and every so often someone likes to show it -__-
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Oilux Jun 26, 2012  Student Writer
Lol you are very right
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:iconyuriko-chan24:
Yuriko-chan24 Jun 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aaand unfortunately us Scots are known for that >.>U
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Jul 9, 2012  Student Writer
Of course~
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Zireael07 Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is brilliant!
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