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Don’t put on your red dress
for he doesn’t know the meaning
he doesn’t want the commitment
he doesn’t care for the color.

The red dress you love to wear
that’s stained from wine and beer
but still carries so much meaning
for who could find a second red dress

Don’t go out on your red dress
for the man who wants nothing more
to screw around and doesn’t understand
the meaning behind a simple red dress.

A red dress for when you dance.
A red dress for when you cry.
A red dress for when you need it.
A red dress for when you care too much.

Don’t put on your red dress for him darling
he doesn’t care for the meaning.
Put it away in the closet, and rarely wear
for he doesn’t deserve your dear red dress.
I was at work the other day, and I saw a woman in a gorgeous red dress. She was hanging on the arm of a younger man, trying to keep his interest, while he stared and barely gave her the time of day. When she left my sight, I don't think I had ever seen such a heartbroken face.

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Soulunar Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is really good! I feel for you though, it isn't right for her to be treated like that :(
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Oilux Jul 2, 2013  Student Writer
Exactly.
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Redbuick95 Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
nice!!!
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Oilux Jun 28, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Redbuick95 Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome
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Sukoshikaze Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well done poem of one sided love. Though there's something I wonder....

In this world filled with several different hearts,
strings of love are strung while others come apart.

With their feelings set on each other, there's something I can't see,
what can be considered a true redeeming quality?

etc, etc. continue?
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Oilux Jun 28, 2013  Student Writer
Food for the thought right there.
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Lovely.
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Oilux Jun 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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worldofnightrain Jun 21, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
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