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For when the daughter experiences a first
it is the passion she feels in the night.

For when the innocent is murdered against reason
it is the cry of a nation that can’t understand.

For when the son disturbs the peace of a day
it is the rage of parents that calm his youth.

For when the music carries upon the floor
it is the color of the dress the darling wears.

For when the veil drops and all is revealed
it is the pain of truth that becomes clear.

For when the last moment is seen
it is the suffering in the eyes that shows all.

For when the child breaks the toys they cherish so
it is the shade their face turns in anger.

For when the people call for devotion
it is the color that speaks for their cries.

For when the people make for a revolution
it is the red that stains the ground eternally.

Because when the people need a reason
it is the stain of a nation that botch the pure history.
Second part of the color series~ This color was red. I tried my best to describe the color red without using the actual word red. It was a challenge but I liked it.

-Colors-
Bullet; Red Red
:bulletorange: Orange
Bullet; Pink Pink
Bullet; YellowYellow
Bullet; GreenGreen
Bullet; Black Black
Bullet; WhiteWhite
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Quite good, indeed!

Keeping the Red under control is quite hard, and one has to truly want to do so for there to be any hope.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! And I do agree
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I may have to visit more of your work.  I enjoyed this! :love:
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Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my thank you!
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:3 It's an honor!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Writer
You're too nice
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's in my nature!  I just refuse to be fake, ya know. :3
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Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Writer
A proud accomplishment right there.
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ilikeeatingcatnipi Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
0o0
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AkatsukiLoverXDX3 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Professional General Artist
I love this piece...<3
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Oilux Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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AlyStark Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
You are brilliant. :hug:
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Oilux Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my thank you!
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klinone Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:faint: This is amazing! :clap:
Wonderful view!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my gosh thank you!
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Chenguang23 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
:iconbravoplz: In comparison to black, I liked black better. However, this was still very powerful.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! And black is my favorite so far as well
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4sauce4 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
This is so powerful!
Bravo! :clap:
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Oilux Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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virus9304 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Student Interface Designer
nice repetition, it get's more interesting as I read it
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Oilux Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Writer
Really? That's great to hear!
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Wow!!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Writer
Good wow or bad wow?
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Awesome WOW :P
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Oilux Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
That's so good to hear, I was worried for a moment.
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GoldenFlameNaLu Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
hehe ^^
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