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The being under the basement cries at night
calling out for one simple friend that it cannot have
family above ignores what it cannot see
except the little boy who hears the screams in dark hours.

Solitary hours after dusk, before dawn
child of man travels down to see the beast that wept
bringing offerings of peace, words of comfort
friendship built on mutual loneliness was molded.

Talks late at night, stars overhead burning light
exciting tales of adventures to be had
but thoughts were simply just thoughts, never to happen together
and tales in the dark were simply that, tales.

Yet the child didn’t know the importance of secrets
family was anything but kind for the monster friend.
Monsters that were unlike the people of normalcy
are unwelcome to the family of the child of man.

Horror couldn’t get away fast enough
family strung him up and though he screamed
family didn’t care for the pain of a monster
who couldn’t feel any pain either way.

Monster lost his child and the child lost his monster
for the flesh is weak and makes misjudgments
the heart forged in war is the coldest of all
never to recover again, the child lost his friend.
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I almost forgot to upload this. Anyways, it's for :iconpoetry-book:'s Scratch That round 5.

Theme: Fantasy
Type: Ballad
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Mood: Love ~Isamu-Chan1 Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome work! I love it!
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~ErraticDream Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Huh, I'm sure there's a deeper meaning, although I wasn't able to find it. Good job anyways :)
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=Oilux Mar 24, 2013  Student Writer
Teehee that's alright. I'm glad you enjoyed my work.
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=Oilux Mar 24, 2013  Student Writer
You liked it?
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I found it interesting, and really liked the way it was put
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Mood: Joy *MichaelGarcia7 Feb 18, 2013  Professional Writer
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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=Oilux Mar 8, 2013  Student Writer
Haha thanks.
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*MichaelGarcia7 Mar 12, 2013  Professional Writer
No problem!
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Mood: Love *TheAnimalsRight Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! What a fantastic tale
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