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You're gone now and away,
sleeping silently somewhere else
never speaking and always silent.

If we had talked more,
would you still be here
lying next to me in bed?

To bring you back,
I would walk five thousand miles
just like in that song that you love.

But you'll never hear music again
and we'll all be here still
just moving here through life.

And no one gets to see your smile
while your families mourns their loss
and all we have are memories.

To bring you back
I would happily take your place
in the land of the never living.

Because you're being missed,
and no one knows,
what they're going to do without you.

Sleeping silent mourning
the sun never seen again
resting eternally.
My friend, Jessie Winterholler died. I miss her.
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123-WolfGirl Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
I cied while reading this, and I'm sorry about your friend. It made me think about my cousin and one of my really good friends, I wished I could've said something to change their fate.....
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Oilux Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much :hug:
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123-WolfGirl Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
You're welcome, I thought a lot when I read it. It was an amazing poem, it had much emotion behind it.
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racerman56 Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This brings tears to my eyes, I have lost too many friends and family in the last couple of years.
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Oilux Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student Writer
Losing people is the worst
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KNC1997 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
Just now reading your poems.. I have 11 in my Deviantwatch messages I kept to read eventually this is the first one x]

I am so so sorry for your lost. Q-Q
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smilingpeeps Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
beautifully heartbreaking work. may your friend rest in peace.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Writer
I really hope that she does.
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Moaheya Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If a picture is worth a thousand words, then an emotion is worth a million, but all the words in the world don't quite cut it when writing about loss that's close to the heart, do they.
Well done. I love your work.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much. This comment made my day.
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Moaheya Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very, very welcome :)
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SakyoDawnii Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry about your friend~ May she rest in peace <3
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
I hope that she will. At least she's in a better place now.
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SonicAngel15 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm very sorry for your loss, but know that your friend is in Heaven with the Lord.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
I just hope she's happy there.
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist
Its beautiful. And im very sorry for your loss, i understand the empty
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
I just miss her so much
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist
I know the feeling I'm so sorry
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
It's okay. It's not the first time I've lost someone, so at least I know that it will get better.
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist
Yea time is all which really blows
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Time is the essence of reality, but in all truth it really does just suck.
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist
:: nods ::
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Amebr Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Lovely peice of writing. I'm sorry to hear about your friend. :hug:
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you, and I just hope she is in a better place.
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