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Her cold lips
pink in nature
but cold underneath.

There's no life
in those two strips of flesh.

The rest of her is hot,
but her lips are always ice.

Delilah, do you love me?

Of course I do.


Her eyes are just as cold
as her cold dead lips.

Delilah, do you love me?

...yes, I do


Her hands leave hot trails down my back
but her lips leave frost on my skin.

Delilah, do you love me?

...no....


and her cold dead lips
touched my own.
Based off this wonderful photograph:






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love4arts Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing. Paints a great picture. :)
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Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much!
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silentangelawaits Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Student Artist
Breath taking i love this so descriptive and i love how you wrote this simply wonderful good job.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! Gosh everyone is so nice here.
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silentangelawaits Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Artist
npz ur so welcome ^_^
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TheLionAndTheFish Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
Beautiful, I can almost feel the cold lips!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Really? That's so good to hear from this end!
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TheLionAndTheFish Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
Yes, really!;)
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TheBloodyEpicPumpkin Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Student Writer
First thought: Samson and Delilah.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Who?
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