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Her cold lips
pink in nature
but cold underneath.

There's no life
in those two strips of flesh.

The rest of her is hot,
but her lips are always ice.

Delilah, do you love me?

Of course I do.


Her eyes are just as cold
as her cold dead lips.

Delilah, do you love me?

...yes, I do


Her hands leave hot trails down my back
but her lips leave frost on my skin.

Delilah, do you love me?

...no....


and her cold dead lips
touched my own.
Based off this wonderful photograph:






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love4arts Oct 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing. Paints a great picture. :)
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Oilux Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much!
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silentangelawaits Oct 25, 2012  Student Artist
Breath taking i love this so descriptive and i love how you wrote this simply wonderful good job.
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Oilux Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! Gosh everyone is so nice here.
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silentangelawaits Oct 29, 2012  Student Artist
npz ur so welcome ^_^
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:iconthelionandthefish:
Beautiful, I can almost feel the cold lips!
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Oilux Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Really? That's so good to hear from this end!
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:iconthebloodyepicpumpkin:
First thought: Samson and Delilah.
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Oilux Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Who?
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