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I am.

I am the person who lives.

I am the person who loves.

I am the girl who cries to sleep at night, wishing I could be prettier.

I am the boy who is trying to live up to everyone else's expectations other than my own.

I am the invisible who linger in the hallways.

I am the person who bullies to feel better.

I am the parent who gave up after my child went to jail.

I am the daughter who works at fifteen because my parents can't.

I am the person who is bullied for being different.

I am the person who lives because I don't know what happens after death.

I am the woman who is hit on every day because of my looks, making them more of a curse then
a blessing.

I am the man who took steroids to be stronger and now am discarded by society.

I am the child who was forgotten.

I am the broken.

I am the hero.

I am the villain.

I am the takers.

I am the givers.

I am the deserving.

I am the bullied.

I am the pressured.

I am the suffering.

I am the surviving.

I am the wishers.

I am the dreamers.

I am the abused.

I am forgotten.

I am human.
Another poem. I really like this one, its been my project for the past couple of days.




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FishingforKitty Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:happycry: --- 50x50px Emoticon this kind of work is always amazing beacause there are problems in life for people that no one wants to see or deal with
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AnimalAmelia16 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this
*sniff* Really I do...
It's just...
So Beautiful T-T
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student Writer
:hug:Thank you dear!
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AnimalAmelia16 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your Welcome Friend!! :pat:
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JayEyedWolf Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely beautiful. Someone pass this magnificent writer the Pulitzer Prize.
Thank you.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful work with us.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Writer
:iconhappytearplz: You are the nicest person ever. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.
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JayEyedWolf Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're so very welcome. :3
I love this so much. Thank you, again, for sharing this with us. :3
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Lost-in-Underland Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student General Artist
I love it. I could think of someone i know for each line. i also fit into many of them
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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MaryyumSolangi Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
HAD to comment...:) EXTREMELY awesome....<3 <3 <3
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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MaryyumSolangi Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
You're welcome...:)
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:iconyoitexmiharuforever:
YoiteXMiharuforever Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
Wow. Thats flipping amazing.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much!
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YoiteXMiharuforever Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Yourwelcome! :D
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nicolegraffitty Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011
beautiful.
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trixief98 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011
I hope u don't mind I'm goin to puy this on face book an ofcourse I'm gonna tell everyone who u r an that u wrote this amazing poem signed MR. DAVIS
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much! I dont mind at all!
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CrematedMan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Student Writer
This is just so beautiful
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raco89 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
so true...
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zethlock Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
" i am all of us" i mosty like!!! :thumbsup:
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Sunerii Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a beautiful piece~
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you.
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allykat08 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
One of my favorites of yours. =]
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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night-of-light Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Love this. :heart:
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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violentflowerable15 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing. Your poetry is breath-taking!you have a gift! use it well.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much!
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violentflowerable15 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
anytime!
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LegendFire Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
This is truly amazing.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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200breast Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011
Beautifully written. This is truly amazing
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Choxolip Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
It's amazing how writing can sum up the things we really itch to say but can't. Love this poem :)
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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YoiteXMiharuforever Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011
I really like it! :+favlove:
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Student Writer
:heart:
Thanks.
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YoiteXMiharuforever Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
np
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Frostlights Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011
This was breathtaking, thank you for sharing.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Student Writer
No trouble at all! I'm glad you liked it!
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Caranaldion Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011
Impressive, as already mentioned, in a breathtaking way :-)

Somehow, it reminds me of Underworlds' <<Moaner>>
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Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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koko231 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very well written, I like it ^^
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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koko231 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem~!
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Proudchinese Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
This is beautiful! I love poems like this that are simple in structure and yet so very deep <3
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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coolsarahkry Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
this is AWESOME~
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