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There are moments
that you wish never end

Then there are moments
that couldn't go by fast enough.

Through at the times we have seen
and all the lives we have lived.

Time seems to be
the one thing that never changes.

Time likes to repeat itself
going hour by hour, second by second.

They say, today is history
but tomorrow is a mystery.

History likes to repeat itself,
so maybe tomorrow isn't such a mystery.
More about time than it is history really, but I think you get the message.


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:iconyuriko-chan24:
Yuriko-chan24 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i'm telling you...you're going to be famous for your outlook on life through your poetry :) at least i hope you do
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Oilux Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Writer
I hope so as well. If I ever get a book published, you're so getting a free copy.
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Yuriko-chan24 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
awww! same goes for you! i'm gonna be the next jk Rowling and no one's gonna stop me!
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Writer
Lol you better! We're do gonna rule the writing world.
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:iconyuriko-chan24:
Yuriko-chan24 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you and me totally! our names are gonna be EVERYWHERE! and maybe someday, we can write something together!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Student Writer
Hell ya! I eagerly await that day!
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:iconyuriko-chan24:
Yuriko-chan24 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
as do i...as do i...
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student Writer
Why won't it then?
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Romano--Greece Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student General Artist
to me history is a mystery
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Writer
With how much it's been warped, history really is a mystery.
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Romano--Greece Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student General Artist
and that's why i love XD
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:iconteri-taichou:
Teri-Taichou Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
Truth in it's simplicity.
No doubt
You definitely understand your history. :)
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
wow so amazing and history goes really fast
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012
no prob
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samwinchester14 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I love it. :love: Especially the first 2 stanzas. I started thinking about all the wonderful moments I experienced that I wish never ended, then I thought about the horrible moments I wish didn't happen. Nicely written. :thumbsup:
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Oilux Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very true, this is a fantastic poem. The last two stanzas were my favorite, they gave me chills!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks
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