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Beat beat beat
Heartbeat
Beat beat beat

Just a breath away
Just a step away
From finding
All there is to find

Beat beat beat
Heartbeat
Beat beat beat

Listen to the beat
The beat of my heart

Its saying stay
That I don't want to let you go

Even though my mind
Is telling you to leave

Beat beat beat
Heartbeat
Beat beat beat

Feel the blood rushing
Feel the fast pace
Of my beating heart

Its saying
Everything I could possibly want

Beat beat beat
Heartbeat
Beat beat beat
I like listening to the sound of my heartbeat.
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:iconironbatmaiden91:
IronBatMaiden91 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
I love this!!
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Writer
Gosh thank you! I just love your icon too
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:iconironbatmaiden91:
IronBatMaiden91 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
You're most welcome. :D and thank you!
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner May 6, 2012
wow my heart is beating so fast and slow when i was reading this
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Writer
Really? Awesome
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:icondomosushiluver:
DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
i love that poem
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:iconflamesalvo:
FlameSalvo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice :3 me likes a lot. <3
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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:icondnangil101:
DNAngil101 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D'aww, I feelt like this just MOMENTS ago! ;u;
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
:hug:
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:iconkanbhik:
Kanbhik Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its a beautiful poem! i really liked it n.n
What about we listen to it instead of reading. Like with a voice according to the poem and heart beat effects. What Do you think?
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
I think the exact same
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:iconkanbhik:
Kanbhik Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If you get to do it, please let me know :3
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Writer
Will do!
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:iconkanbhik:
Kanbhik Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!! :3
I love heartbeats aswell n.n
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:iconi-am-tsukiko:
i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student General Artist
0o0 this would be a cooooool song!!!!!!
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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:iconi-am-tsukiko:
i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Welcomez~!!!
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FallingDream003 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like the way that poem always references back to the hearts rhythm. There is only minor mistake in the title, but it doesn't take away what the poem offers. :)
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! And I fixed the error.
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:iconfallingdream003:
FallingDream003 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome.
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:iconi-am-tsukiko:
i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student General Artist
I just caught that~
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:iconfallingdream003:
FallingDream003 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I caught it when I was done reading because it was not a big problem for me to overlook.:)
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:iconi-am-tsukiko:
i-am-tsukiko Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Mmhmm! I got what it meant.
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:icontouchofwishery:
TouchOfWishery Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
very pretty
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you
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:iconjazziturelove:
jazziturelove Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
beautiful
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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:iconjazziturelove:
jazziturelove Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
Sure thing
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:iconlarsvegas1982:
larsvegas1982 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
awesome work, regards
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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pinklilac2 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
Nice, but shouldn't the title be "Heartbeat" instead of "Heatbeat"?
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Yes it should. ^^;
I fixed it.
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:iconpinklilac2:
pinklilac2 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
Ok...glad to help!^^
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:iconjust-living:
Just-living Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
people make mistakes.
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:iconpinklilac2:
pinklilac2 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
I meant no offence,^^;
Just wanted to help...
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:iconjust-living:
Just-living Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) no hard feelings. I was just saying. xD
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:iconpinklilac2:
pinklilac2 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
Ok...^^
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:iconbenji715:
benji715 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Photographer
i like
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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:iconlequebecois1962:
lequebecois1962 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I love it.
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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:iconlequebecois1962:
lequebecois1962 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
All pleasure is for me. ;-)
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DrunkenFangschrecke Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
nice, buuuut i guess i see a typo in the titlle ^^
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Haha yes, I fixed it
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:icondrunkenfangschrecke:
DrunkenFangschrecke Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
awesome :)
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:iconskuldpt:
Skuldpt Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah me too :P
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:iconherbis:
Herbis Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
hmmmm, i seen it on GO Power Master widget
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:iconoilux:
Oilux Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Writer
Seen what?
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brilliantpanda Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012
Aaah it's super pretty >.<
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