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She writes with green ink
eternal scrawls upon the page.

She wrote with green ink,
because it was the color of his eyes,
and the pond in the park,
and the seats on the bus,
and the grass outside,
and rose stems.

She wrote with green ink
even when her boss yelled
and the teacher screamed
and nothing worked out.

Because green was her favorite
and it was his favorite as well
even when he was sick while
his skin was green.

He still loved the color green
when the dirt fell down
when he didn’t recover,
the grass that bloomed
was the most angelic jade.

And she still wrote in green ink
because it was the color of the grass,
and his favorite color
and the color of his eyes
on his last final days.
I'm sure you guys totally forgot about my color series, because I haven't updated it in a while, but rest assured I have not! This is (obviously) the color green. I got the inspiration while at work I was looking through the drawer and found a green pen. I wrote with it all day and took it home. I then wrote this poem with it.

-Other Colors-

-Other Colors-
:bulletred: Red: fav.me/d5tmo2s
:bulletyellow: Yellow: fav.me/d5vfpsy
:bulletgreen: Green: fav.me/d6b2x7b
:bulletblack: Black: fav.me/d5sikiq
:bulletwhite: White: fav.me/d621v44
:bulletpink: Pink fav.me/d7pxrvd
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Ashbrie13 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student General Artist
this is so beautiful but depressing
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xXThe-WhispererXx Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is beautiful
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rambows729 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Whoa..... This is me in a way. The colour gren. It is my big brothers favorite colour. And I make many things a deep green because of that..... Because I love him and....... Wow.
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MusicMaster9 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me, when I read this = Yorido 
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ilikeeatingcatnipi Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
woa! 0o0
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NemoX7 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This positively reminds me of the colour green. How very green this poem is. It just flows straight off the tongue. Excellent work.
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xInsanityVictim Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Photographer
I almost cried. ;a;
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Oilux Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Writer
:hug:
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DarkX1122 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
Wooow...simply amazing.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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