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For when she enters the room of music
the people turn to stare at her in awe.

As the music plays without a hitch
she moves around and dances with grace.

The men trade and all night they dance
the light of candles casting great shadows.

The beauty of her is greater than all
coming forth when she dips low in elegance.

The men dance and the women envy
and the elegant girl has a mask of ink.

The calls of night are too great to hold
and she slips away when the music is gone.

Men disperse but women still talk
elegance of woman is nothing to be heard.

The girl is gone but the music still echoes
before tomorrow even dawn the rumors start.

Of the girl in the ebony dress that danced by night
but was never seen by the charcoal people again.
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This is my first piece in the color series. I decided to start out with the color black.

An entry for the Colors contest by DLD: [link]


-Other colors-
:bulletwhite: White: [link]
:bulletred: Red: [link]
:bulletyellow: Yellow: [link]
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Mood: Love *FOX-hime Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is amazingly done
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=Oilux Apr 27, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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~xxazureyuzukixx Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautifully written! I like the title and the idea!!
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=Oilux Apr 15, 2013  Student Writer
I'm so happy you like it!
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~xxazureyuzukixx Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome!I have to read the others when I have a chance
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~Lilithmae1231 Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice! Nice choice of words, it flows nicely and evokes very interesting imagery in my mind.
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~Alontwig Jan 27, 2013  Student Photographer
Lovely, the imagery is unique.
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:iconcreatorallanvre:
hmmm... Is it about a strip club?
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=MissStorm Jan 25, 2013  Professional Artist
Wow, beautiful imagery x
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~tinaaw Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful work..stunning
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