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Dirty water,
corrupted laughter,
cracked dreams,
and broken seams.

Cries in the night
as life becomes a fight
there's just no more light.

Men are trying,
women are running
children are crying
people are dying.

Let's go, he whispered.
I-It's dangerous, she stuttered.
But we can't just stay, they uttered.

Chaos roams the streets
and blood's on the ground like treats.

Dystopia never ends
as society bends.
Life shall be dystopia
and never a utopia.
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shiver2012 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Professional Writer
allot of rhyme sounds like something someone would write in the middle of a post apocalyptic world in a purrfect utopia you know what i mean its hard to explain .....  like hungergames ik a terrible example but itss all i could muster atm   
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CrystalTearz55 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
fucking beautiful
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Oilux Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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parcelo Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
nice one................
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Oilux Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
wow life is scary place it can be heaven and hell
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Soundsparkz Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Whew.. got goosebumps just reading this.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks, though I'm not sure it's a good thing.
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Cows-on-steroids Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is beautiful.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Cows-on-steroids Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome! ^^
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cool
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Oilux Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks.
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
my pleasure ^^
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Miskle Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Loved the 3rd stanza.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks. That one was my favorite.
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theNinthLegion Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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Wew~
I got goosebumps! xD
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Oilux Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
Lol that is such a great reaction icon.
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