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Love, today you shall not die,
because you are my light
and to live without you
is to live without hope.

Darling,
lying cold and dead,
I will give my life for you
as I swore on our wedding day.

May God take my prayer
and listen for my soul
instead of yours.

My sins shall pay for our crimes
through my own death.

My darling...
I will die for you
For I know this is my fate.
So I can't really think of anything to say here, so I'm gonna go work on my NaNoWriMo novel and hope I don't write crap like I'm pretty sure that this is.


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Curlygurly222 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely not crap. This is absolutely beautiful. The thought of someone dying for another makes me think there is still hope for humanity. Love is beautiful and so are your poems!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Writer
Aw you really thinks so? That is exactly what I was thinking when I wrote it!
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Curlygurly222 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats awesome!:D I really do think its lovely:) Just wonderful!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Writer
Gosh that just means so much to me.
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Curlygurly222 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime!:D
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Ayame713 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Find the 1 and you will get kissed in 11 days. IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII1IIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII. Find the $ and you will hav good luck for 2 years. ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssssss sssssssssssss. …sss. sssssssssssssssssssss$ssssssssssssssss. *****MAKE A WISH*****. Now find the m and your wish will come true. nnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnmnnnnnnn nnnnnnn. nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. Repost this to 9 other pictures and everything will come true.. Ignore and you will have bad luck for 9 years
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Neko-Chan199 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww!!!!!*sniff*
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Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
:hug:
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Tragic and romantic. If it werer the old days, you'd be a venerated poet from these words alone.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
Oh my thank you so much. :blush:
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conelyn Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
it's nice! :)
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Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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HHHEEEYYY Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh,I'm in NaNoWriMo too!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
Really? That's so awesome! How's it going for you?
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HHHEEEYYY Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
We got started a bit late,but I'm surprised I even came up with a good idea.I've written over 300 words so far,but that's not that much.It's okay though. :) How bout you?
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Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Writer
I've had my idea for a while, and so far I've got 20k I try to keep to 2 thousand words a day, otherwise I'll get behind and I won't finish.
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HHHEEEYYY Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Shit man.I've only got 1,600 something.
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Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
Really? You're gonna fall behind! I just hit 26 thousand last night.
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NnyorNieorKnee Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it~
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Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Everydaykelly Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thats sad, but written to well!! I love it


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Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
Lol thank you for the wonderful comment. And because you were so nice I shall vote for you.
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silvergabetha834 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Professional General Artist
It may be sappy as heck, but I enjoyed reading it. Also, good luck on NaNo! I am sitting here procrastinating as well!
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Oilux Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
Lol thanks so much! And best of luck to you as well.
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