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Love, today you shall not die,
because you are my light
and to live without you
is to live without hope.

Darling,
lying cold and dead,
I will give my life for you
as I swore on our wedding day.

May God take my prayer
and listen for my soul
instead of yours.

My sins shall pay for our crimes
through my own death.

My darling...
I will die for you
For I know this is my fate.
So I can't really think of anything to say here, so I'm gonna go work on my NaNoWriMo novel and hope I don't write crap like I'm pretty sure that this is.


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Curlygurly222 Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely not crap. This is absolutely beautiful. The thought of someone dying for another makes me think there is still hope for humanity. Love is beautiful and so are your poems!
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Oilux Dec 12, 2012  Student Writer
Aw you really thinks so? That is exactly what I was thinking when I wrote it!
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Curlygurly222 Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats awesome!:D I really do think its lovely:) Just wonderful!
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Oilux Dec 14, 2012  Student Writer
Gosh that just means so much to me.
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Curlygurly222 Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime!:D
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Ayame713 Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Find the 1 and you will get kissed in 11 days. IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII1IIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII. Find the $ and you will hav good luck for 2 years. ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssssss sssssssssssss. …sss. sssssssssssssssssssss$ssssssssssssssss. *****MAKE A WISH*****. Now find the m and your wish will come true. nnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnmnnnnnnn nnnnnnn. nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. Repost this to 9 other pictures and everything will come true.. Ignore and you will have bad luck for 9 years
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Neko-Chan199 Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww!!!!!*sniff*
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Oilux Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
:hug:
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Everlasting90 Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Tragic and romantic. If it werer the old days, you'd be a venerated poet from these words alone.
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Oilux Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
Oh my thank you so much. :blush:
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