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100 Theme Challenge #31: Beautiful

First attempt at visual poetry, I created that myself. Even though it's crappy I'm proud of it.

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
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A very true and great poem indeed. I especially enjoyed how you did the coloring, very nice. I understand length isn't necessarily everything in a poem, but I (just a personal preference) would have looked forward to more reasons as to why we are all "beautiful", such as maybe the hurtful people engaging in a hurtful action that can be ignored. That, in turn, would maybe lead to more things to add to the list of "it isn't about what you...". <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Again, a very nice poem with a good flow as well as a touching message. I doubt that even one person that reads this can honestly say that they haven't been touched by this and/or experienced this great realization that you have put together in one twelve line poem. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>