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She glared at everyone that came close,
Wrapping her arms around herself.

There was another person, and another;
All of them passing by without a second glance.

But she stared at them,
Studying everyone that walked by.

Something caught her eye
A gorgeous blood red gown.

'Why can't I have that?'
She thought with a growl.

A man passed by
A beautiful watch adorning his wrist.

She growled low in her throat,
Turning away from the sight.

She kept going,
Ignoring the green eyed monster.

'Why can't I have nice things?'
She thought

'You can't because it's just who you are.'
Her thoughts answered.

'What am I then?'
She saw another person with something nice.

That's easy,
you are envy.
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100 Theme Challenge #7: Envy

Dress reference: [link]

As you can probably tell this is going to be a series:

Pride: [link]
Wrath: [link]
Lust: [link]
Greed: [link]
Gluttony: [link]
Sloth: [link]
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=sunshinegypsy Jan 11, 2012  Professional Writer
This reminded me of the quote "This is why we can't have nice things". I liked it. It felt like a real version of envy, not the kind people like to write about.
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=Oilux Jan 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :) That means a lot to me.
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=sunshinegypsy Jan 11, 2012  Professional Writer
:heart: Of course.
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~satellite-hearts Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really good!!!!!!!! :wow:
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=Oilux Jan 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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~satellite-hearts Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!!! :D
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~MySilentWhispers Jan 11, 2012  Student Photographer
NICE! <3
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=Oilux Jan 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much.
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~MySilentWhispers Jan 11, 2012  Student Photographer
np! I'm so glad you named all of them in the pic! The writing was fantastic btw!!! <333
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=Oilux Jan 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you, it was hard finding the right picture but I eventually found it.
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